Brilliant. I could nearly see Frank and Lucas's faces. Absolutely brilliant.
DerelictDaughter11
· 1 year ago
::frantic applause::
hooray!!! i couldn't stop reading this wonderful story, even though i absolutely should have waited until i got home. excellent. thank you!
and p.s. shakesquill is an awesome idea. so exciting! :)
NameChanged
· 1 year ago
That was beautiful. Thank you.
cheezwiz
· 1 year ago
Dammit - you made me cry a little. Hope I have something as moving and meaningful to contribute soon, thanks for putting this together!
PortlyDyke
· 1 year ago
Forced me to cry. Again.
spiffykt
· 1 year ago
That was wonderful. Also, I love Shakesquill in general. Wh00t!
elle
· 1 year ago
That was so good.
MarkTemporis
· 1 year ago
You posted a draft of this a long time ago, didn't you? I'd swear I've read it before. Great stuff!
liberalandproud
· 1 year ago
I wanted more, which is always a good sign. It left me with a warm feeling. I needed that. Thank you.
deeky
· 1 year ago
“I know.”
that's exactly what my mother said when i told her i was gay.
great story, liss.
pfunkem
· 1 year ago
yes, i'm ridicuously late reading, but it was long! anyway, very nice, very nice. simply beautifully written. i like this world quite a bit.
bloomslikeacut
· 10 months ago
To be honest, it's dull wish-fulfillment.
I don't care about Frank or Lucas. They're bland stock characters.
And the dialogue is...wooden. "If you walk out that door, don’t bother coming back"? Uh huh.
And I'm really confused by the setting. Pops? A glass of milk? I would think this story was taking place in 1952 if it weren't for mentions of things like bank cards and Wal-Mart greeters.
All Comments
hooray!!! i couldn't stop reading this wonderful story, even though i absolutely should have waited until i got home. excellent. thank you!
and p.s. shakesquill is an awesome idea. so exciting! :)
Great stuff!
that's exactly what my mother said when i told her i was gay.
great story, liss.
I don't care about Frank or Lucas. They're bland stock characters.
And the dialogue is...wooden. "If you walk out that door, don’t bother coming back"? Uh huh.
And I'm really confused by the setting. Pops? A glass of milk? I would think this story was taking place in 1952 if it weren't for mentions of things like bank cards and Wal-Mart greeters.