ShakesQuill - Latest Comments in Untitled

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bloomslikeacut — Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:18:25 -0000

To be honest, it's dull wish-fulfillment.

I don't care about Frank or Lucas. They're bland stock characters.

And the dialogue is...wooden. "If you walk out that door, don’t bother coming back"? Uh huh.

And I'm really confused by the setting. Pops? A glass of milk? I would think this story was taking place in 1952 if it weren't for mentions of things like bank cards and Wal-Mart greeters.

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pfunkem — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 16:19:51 -0000

yes, i'm ridicuously late reading, but it was long! anyway, very nice, very nice. simply beautifully written. i like this world quite a bit.

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deeky — Fri, 18 Jul 2008 12:00:13 -0000

“I know.”

that's exactly what my mother said when i told her i was gay.

great story, liss.

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liberalandproud — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 15:37:54 -0000

I wanted more, which is always a good sign. It left me with a warm feeling. I needed that. Thank you.

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MarkTemporis — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 12:44:23 -0000

You posted a draft of this a long time ago, didn't you? I'd swear I've read it before.
Great stuff!

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elle — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 00:32:59 -0000

That was so good.

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spiffykt — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 22:40:52 -0000

That was wonderful. Also, I love Shakesquill in general. Wh00t!

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PortlyDyke — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 21:43:06 -0000

Forced me to cry. Again.

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cheezwiz — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 19:38:57 -0000

Dammit - you made me cry a little. Hope I have something as moving and meaningful to contribute soon, thanks for putting this together!

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NameChanged — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 18:45:27 -0000

That was beautiful. Thank you.

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DerelictDaughter11 — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 17:10:17 -0000

::frantic applause::

hooray!!! i couldn't stop reading this wonderful story, even though i absolutely should have waited until i got home. excellent. thank you!

and p.s. shakesquill is an awesome idea. so exciting! :)

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Faith — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 16:43:55 -0000

Brilliant. I could nearly see Frank and Lucas's faces. Absolutely brilliant.